Score: 10

"Best episode so far"

submission: Blockhead: Episode 7

date: June 2, 2006

The Blockhead series has to be one of the greatest humorous movies on Ng, if not the best, and this one probably is the best one among them. I enjoyed watching this movie very much, and I even laughed on the first 6 times I saw it (the joke gets old after that). I can compliment you a lot about this movie (and I mean a lot) and throw some ideas (and I mean some) and comments... And this is what I will do, so listen up. Most of the comments I will say are little problems that bothered me a bit, not something serious.

The graphics were super, so let me compliment you for the great job you did on with drawing and animating. How did you do the houses in the into at the beginning? It looks great. Anyway, the job you did on the charecters was fantastic, but I don't think you animated them as fabulously as you have drawn them. Firstly, most of the people in the courtroom neither moved nor blinked, it made them look like background, while they were actual background charecters (which is some of both I assume). Secondly, the fat, grey haired guy never moves his arms, while moving his arms could help emphasizing his anger. Plus it could add humour when done correctly. Thirdly, the atterny at the beginning's face didn't look matching to the situation most of the time. Fourthly, when Blockhead says llllovely, his dancing doesn't completely match what he says.
The background was very good, though, nothing to say there (exept for no motion at the clock, but it is not critical). In general, the graphics were totally awesome, just work a bit harder on making the charecters look more alive. Also, the writings at the beginning of the movie disapears pretty quickly before I could read it. BTW, I love this "the Swain" intro, as simple as it is.

The style was very good, I just love your directing, it couldn't be more humorously great and matching to the movie. The intro of every blockhead episode, the one with the houses and the great music, adds a lot to the style. I just have nothing bad to say about this perfect directing of the movie, it was genious.

The sound was also magnificent, the music in the intro matches the movie and it's style perfectly. So as the music you put in the middle of the movie matches this part. However, I must praise you for the extraordinary and stupendous (I am running out of words here) voice acting, which matched the charecters, the style, the humorous atmosphere, the graphics, and blah perfectly. AWESOME!

About the script, I only can say that it is genious, I can't really explain it, neither can i point on the thing that makes it so funny, but it is so. I simpley can't say anything more on the script, since it was too perfect to be talked about. The ending where blockhead explain why he didn't say it sooner sucked a bit, though.

Now, for some advices i can give you in order to make this movie generally better. Firstly, add a loading bar at the beginning of the movie so that we can see what is the movie loading progress. Secondly, add this board at the top where we can stop\play the movie, because it is getting annoying when I have to stop with a left click. Maybe add also a quality option to it. Thridly, add subtitles please :-D.

Anyway, this is a super duper irregularly funny movie, and I enjoyed watching it a lot, just fix some of the things I told you to, and it will be perfect. Great job!
>Lidov<

Score: 7

"Nice one"

submission: She's Gone..

date: May 13, 2006

It was a nice music video, I have enjoyed watching the movie, but I have enjoyed listening to the music more, a very good pick. Of course that whenever I think of this song, I think of the superb collab that was made for it, but this one was fine also. However, there were some things that really bothered me about this movie and I think that you need to change them.

Well, the graphics in this movie weren't very good, a lot of improvement is needed in this aspect. The charecter doesn't match the serious themed song, maybe something which looks more real could do the job. At the beginning, the moon doesn't look very real, just like a huge circle, try to look at moon pictures and make it better. The text at the beginning and at the end moves a lot from place to place, use the align to mkake it steady. The walking of the main charecter is very strange, plus he doesn't move as fast as he should move with this kind of walking. The charecter is almost in the size of the houses and the doors are really small. The lines of the buildings are bent and there is no space at all between one building to an other. Not to mention the main charecter's house, which looks aweful, and I believe you know why. Inside the house, the lines are way too stright, the pillow looks like a rectangle (which they are). If the charecter's beloved one has hair, also he can have hair, he doesn't have to be bold because he is male. Also, the grass when he walks too kill himself looks horrible. The lines are too long. He is, once again, in this scene, larger than the trees, which can't be right. At the stars scene, there is still a little line of the last scene. Also, the colours of the cliff are too bright and it doesn't look like a cliff.

The style of the movie was pretty fine, not a lot to say at that matter. The style is what makes a music video, in this case it seemed liked the directing was very nice. Of course that the graphics bothered me a lot, and some of it also intorrupted the style. ANyway, there are a few stupupid scenes in my opinion. Firstly, the scene at the end when he wants to jump but she tells him no because she loves him and then they both fade out. What does that suppose to mean? Fading out is usually when a charecter dies or something. Also, the scene seems kind of silly. Secondly, the texts at the end are also silly and they ruin the serious theme of the music video.

The sound was awesome, gotta love the Oasis, or something. Anyway, it looks like the movie only deals with the meaning of the song rather than the actual music. This is one of the things that bothered the style. You need to put something there thatconnects the sound to the animation. Besides that, it was fine. Awesome song.

Just one note that bothered me a bit, the reply button leads to the play button. I don't want to click twice to see the movie again...

Anyway, this is a pretty nice music video, I have enjoyed watching it and listening to its music. However, you need to improve some things in order to make it better. Improve a lot of things about the graphics and also the connection between the sound and the animation. Besides that, the animation was cool, you got an extra point for the awesome song, good job.
>Lidov<

Score: 7

"Pretty nice"

submission: The Simpsons Soundboard

date: May 12, 2006

This is a pretty nice collection of sounds (and other things) you have there, it was nice for me to hear all of thos sounds. You have also chosen very good and funny sentances, which also makes the soundboard better. However, there are somethings you need to fix in order to make this soundboard better. A lot of technical problems which, I think, can be fixed easily.

Technical problems:
1. When you click on the first sounds in Homer's, Burney's and Professor Frink's page, the sound doesn't sound like them at all, it is much lower than it should be.
2. When you click on a sound and then "back to charecter selection", the sound continues to play.
3. In the extras, when you click on the pictures and then on "back to extras menu" it brings you to the extra sound selection, rather than the extras menu and the help page.
4. I am not sure if it is a technical problem, but there is no soundtreck (background music) in the extras menu.
5. You can't get out of the extras menu to the main menu without clicking on one of the extra options and from there to the main menu.
6+. There might be more, so check it, but I didn't find more.

The graphics were pretty good, most of the soundboards are not as elegent as this sound board. I like the way that in every charecter's page there is his picture and his name. However, it is a "The simpsons" soundboard, so what about making a "The Simpsons" font rather than a regular font in different colours? Also, the buttons for the sound are not very buttony (which means looks like a button), also the "back to main menu" kinds of buttons. Try to put some graphics and colouring into them, that way they look boring. Also, I believe you know how to use the up, over, down and hit, so use it. (in case you don't know, you can make a graphical shape a button by clicking it and pressing on F8 then chosing the button option. Then you could double click the new symbol and there are 4 frames-up, over, done and hit. Up is the how the button looks like when it is not pressed or being hold with the mouse over. Over is how the button looks like when you hold the mouse over the button. Down is how the button looks when you click it and Hit is the space of the button, which means where you can press on it). So use it, the linking text annoys me. Also, what about making a background which matches the Simpsons, rather than just being elegent? I think that the 'shape' snimation you do with the text when you open something is nice, but it is too slow, try to make it faster so that people could read it without waiting for it. Also, the radar produtions intro is too long, try to make the red thingy move faster.

The style, as I have also implied before, was pretty good. There is not much of a style, of course, since it is just a soundboard and there is not much of a place for directing, but the whole board seemed elegent. However, as I said before, it barely had any connection to The Simpsons.

The sound was good, however, I didn't like the background sound of the main menu, it was pretty annoying and didn't match the Simpsons at all. What about making the background sound "The Sismpsons" theme? It would be superb. Also, make a button which allows you to stop the background sound when you are at a menu. The sounds of the soundboard itself where pretty strange too, most of them were differ by their tons, which was pretty weird to hear. Besides that the sound was nice, nice collection of sounds.

The whole board was also pretty interactive, many buttons leading you to many places. However, as I have written in the technical problems, you have a lot of problems. Fix them, and it will be good.

Anyway, this is a very good soundboard, very nice collection of sounds. All you have to do is to fix the technical problems, make the graphics more Simpsonish and graphicize the buttons, and it will be a lot better. Very nice one, good job.
>Lidov<

Score: 10

"So very awesome."

submission: the YuYu

date: May 5, 2006

Usually, I would just sum it up to "it was perfect, nothing else to add" or "its perfection cannot be discribed with words" or something of that nature, but since I have enjoyed so much from this movie, I will have to write something longer than that. The movie came a lot before I expected it to come, I thought that I would have to wait a long time, like between "prowlies at the river" and "littleFoot", but fortunately, I was wrong. I must say that this has to be the best movie among all of the bitey series (Btw, congrats for getting your own collection, you deserve it). Anyway, now I will throw some compliments, since the perfection of this movie stunned me. This is also why I gae you a 10, I don't usually give away so many 10's.

Lets start with the best aspect in your movie, and I think that also was made in the best way from all of the movies in Ng, which is some compliment. I am, of course, talking about the graphics of the movie, the merely perfect graphics shocked me, I didn't have an idea that these kinds of drawings can be drawn with this program called 'flash'. Every frame and frame was full of so many graphical details that you need to see a few times to actually catch (like pink floyd, just with hearing). So since I have nothing bad to say about the graphics, I will just give you a few frames and scenes which I liked especially and things I was really amazed by (and there is a lot). But lets start with one things which wasn't bad, but bothered me a bit, this thing is the text in the beginning of the movie and in the end of it. This is the only thing that bothered me with the graphics, so maybe changing it to something more like the font you have in the first Bitey? Or maybe something which would match the blue general colour and the forest kind of thing? Ok, lets continue with many, many compliments, shall we?
Firstly, I was terribley amazed until I almost got an heart attack to see the many colours you have used in this movie. So many shades of blue, green and blue-green in so many objects in the background. I usually start talking about charecters while speaking of graphics, but this time, I must start talking about the fantastic background, since it was the best drawn aspect in the whole movie. The background, if you look a little far away from the screen, looks so very real that it is a bit scary. There are some scenes which left me with my mouth open and still are when I think of them. The best one among them is the one where yo see the lake a bit before the attacking scene.
Secondly, you obviously know a lot about motion of charecters, because the way Bitey moves is just perfect. Lets take the attacking scene where he jumps at the YuYu, the way you draw the 'lines' of motions which are too quick to be seen is just magnificent. It just made it looked so real. Also, the way you make the background, whose perfection I have already mentioned, move in the scene where he runs away from the YuYu in the fastest way he can is just so realistic. Not to mention that the background is even very well drawn then. Not to mention the way the YuYu travels, it is simpley breath-taking.
Thirdly, I don't know if there really are creaures such as Bitey and the YuYu, but it seems very logical to me that this is the exact way that they will look if they existed. Not only because you are the original one to draw these charecters or maybe even to invent them, but also because the quality of the picture is like a real photograph. The charecter design of this movie, to sum it up, is simpley perfect, nothing more to say. Even though the background is in a much better quality than the charecters, the charecters' grade should still be 10, while the background should get more.
This is the end of your graphical compliments, because there is no point of saying more. Just let me say that it seems more logical to me that you have filmed it other than you have actually drawn all of it.

Now, the review is still not over, I will continue it next review with my alt -Kraken-.
>To be continued next review with an alt<

Score: 7

"This is not a constructive review"

submission: removeS001

date: May 1, 2006

This was a pretty nice movie, it was one of the movies which were actually pretty crappy if you analyse them carefully, but due to their silly humor, they are very good. Good to see that these kinds of movies are made in order to pwn IWP and his stupid Foamy.
Firstly, the graphics were pretty good for a movie like that, Foamy was very well drawn, he look just like Foamy, just a bit crappier, just like he should look. Also, the background wasn't very Foamy-like, it was much better, this thing kind of ruins the movie! Idiot! Also, the sword should move faster! It couldn't stay in the air while moving that slowly, don't you know anything?!
Secondly, the style was very good, the directing was a very nice thing in spite of it being extremely simple. I like the way you have made this move rediculous, like every real Foamy movie. I have also liked the way you showed that it is a parody in a very clear, aggressive and extreme way.
Thirdly, the sound was awesome! It added a lot of humour to the movie in spite of it being highly annoying. Actually, the annoyence of the sound added much of the humor to it, and added parody points.
Fourthly, the movie was very violent at the end, which is a great ending to a movie like that, nuff said.
The script of the movie, I must say, was genious! The way that you have succeeded putting all the assence of neurotically yours in this short movie is super duper geniousity.
Anyway, this is a very good movie, very hilarious! You only need to improve some things and it will be fine. Actually, IWP needs to learn from you, because you also know how to animate in tweening.
Now respond and get a cookie!
>Lidov<

Score: 8

"Pretty good"

submission: Resident Pico

date: April 30, 2006

This is a pretty good game, I have enjoyed playing it a lot, a great Pico related submission. However, I must tell you, I expected much more from you for Pico day, but this was also very nice.

The graphics were very good, nothing at all to say against it besides one simple single thing. The background seemed way to static for this game and this really bothered me, for some reason. Maybe try to make something move in the background. But besides that, everything was very good, I like the way Pico is drawn, and also the zombies and Nene. Also the way they are animated is awesome. The thing I liked the most is this pico day intro.

The style of the movie was nice, not something too great. Firstly, there is not much plot and scripting behind this game, so this kind of ruins the Pico theme which always has some background before the game itself. Secondly, I just can't point it out, but there wasn't enough things on which I could say "wow, this is good directing", it was pretty average. However, it was pretty good in general, the sound adds a lot, however...

The sound was pretty good, it matched the game perfectly, since the sound, as the game itself, has a very violent theme. Besides that, the sound is good for itself, a very good find at that matter. However, if I perfer hearing something else while playing this genious game, why don't I have the choice to disable this sound and put what I want to hear? Besides that, everything is fine, good shooting sound and good bitting sound, what about a sound for him walking?

This movie was very violent, which matched the Pico theme perfectly. I like to see all of this blood coming out of the zombies like water, and then looking at their insidish thingies comuing out, so don't get me wrong when I say that it is not enough. The only reason of which I say it is due to the fact that they are all dying at the same way all the time. What about making other ways to die, maybe more violent ways, maybe less, I am sure it will be more fun either way.

Te intercreativity in this game was good, I like the genious idea of controlling Pico using your mouse only, that way I can relax while killing Zombies (Resident evil est das liar!). However, the old clicking and shooting game, maybe in a way more sophisticated way, is pretty boring after a while. Not to mention the fact that there are no further levels or more enemies which are harder to kill or something. No way of points, or counting your kills. No improving your armor. Nothing. It is quite simple if you ask me, I think you should make it more complicated or it will get boring after a while. Also, when you click at "play again" it links you to the main page, which mean you should click on play another time. And then on this dialogue between Pico and Nene, it could be nice if you could just skip it all.

The game was pretty humorous for a game I suppose, most of the humour comes from the violence, which could be improved a lot.

Anyway, the game is pretty good, you just need to improve a few things, the most important ones between them are: adding more levels, linking to the beginning of the game instead of the main page and adding to the level of sophistication. Besides that, it was good, well done :-)
>Lidov<

Score: 9

"Nice pico day submission"

submission: Fiberglass Monkey

date: April 30, 2006

As the title says, this is a very nice pico day submission, what i actually meant is that it very good as a submission rather than a pico day flash. I have enjoyed this very much though, it is a very good lemon demon music video, maybe not your best, but it is awesome. Now, I will just make this review much longer, becaue I am evil }:-(

The graphics were very good, maybe the best aspect in this movie, however there are a few things to improve. The charecter design was pretty good, I like the way that the fabreglass monkeys are drawn. The coloring of the charecters in general was also perfect. However, my problem is in the mot important charecter, Pico (as in Pico-day). It seems like this green shirted, orange hair owner little fella' isn't drawn the way it should be drawn and drawn like the rest of your charecters. But the real problem is in the fact that at the beginning of the movie he looks normal, but not at the end. However, besides that everything was very good, besides a few little things I can't really identify.

The style was also very good, like in every music video of yours. Not much to say in here, because it was very good, and I can't see a lot of places to improve the directing besides maybe a few things. Only one thing that bothered me a bit, the movie is more connected to the music rather than to it's content. I will explain with an example, the part when Pico takes the bat and swings it while he is still in bed (before he hits the fiberglass monkeys) seems just unrelated, because, to me at least, it looks like he should be super afraid. This is not that bad though, it was pretty funny in a way, I guess. Anyway, nice directing, I think you should compete Spilberg with his new crappy movies (Munich hurted me badly).

The sound was, like every lemon demon song, great. Of course, it wasn't the best lemon demon song I have heard, a pretty weak song compared to the rest of their songs to be honest, but it was still awesome in a very extreme way. Nothing much to say exept for the fact that the movie matched both the music and the lyrics of the song (sometimes only one of the aspects )-:< ). Anyway, nice song to do a music video on, I can't wait to see what will be the next one (Ahm SamuelandRossella Ahm).

The violence in this movie was very good, in spite of the fact that it was only for a very short period of time in it. The ammount of violence in this movie was enough to make it a lot funnier and more enjoyable, but not too much to make it gross. Not much to say exept for the fact that the blood is very well drawn, as much as the violent parts, this makes it very fun, Hitting monkeys with a baseball bat=funneh!

Still going :-(

The script of the music video was very good, and although most of it was taken from the msic video, I like the small things that you have added. Now, some peole can see it as a dirction thingy, but I like to look at it as a scriptish thing. Also, I like the humorous parts you have added to this "serious themed" movie, and though it wasn't funny in an extreme way, it was a nice addition. I have found the scene where he is hitting the monkeys very humorous.

Also like the many buttons.

Anyway, this was a very good movie, maybe the best submission in Pico day. All you have to do is to improve Pico a bit, make it maybe a bit more connected to it. It is a shame it is not longer. Good luck with the pico day contest. Now I will end this review since I am starting to feel like it is getting worse and worse in every further word I write in it.
Israel rules, sir!
>Lidov<

Score: 8

"Unacceptable!"

submission: Hortencate

date: April 29, 2006

The strangeness of this movie confuses me, I have no idea why I have enjoyed watching this movie. The graphics were good. The charecter design was awesome, I like this charecter of yours. Also, the backgrounding of the movie is pretty nice as well and the awesome colouring. The style is very good, I liked the disorder in the arrangement of the movie, this is the only thing that has made the movie to be what it is. The sound was pretty nice, you have put the right sound at the right time and place. The script was pretty weird, because I couldn't even spot any scripting or plot, it was all just too strange. Anyway, pretty nice movie, nice job.
>Lidov<

Score: 7

"Pretty nice"

submission: Nene Interactive Suicide

date: April 29, 2006

This is a pretty nice game compared to the rest of the games which were made in flash in 1999. It is not something really great, but it was very nice and amusing, I have enjoyed it a lot.

The graphics were pretty nice, needs a lot of fixed though. The charecter design was fine, not a lot to say about that. Her hands seemed very simple drawn and not like real hands, so as her eyes. The herpes on her mouth just doesn't seem very real. Just putting red dots on her mouth doesn't seem so graphically great, so try drawing it better (or whoever have drawn it). The room was very well drawn on the other hand, from the door through the mirror and to the window, it was fine, not too maginificent, but not bad. One thing I have to say about the graphics is that the blood is pretty awfully drawn, at least most of the time. For example, when she cuts herself with the razor in the drawer, the blood just looks like red water which leaves red dots on the door. Also, when she speaks, her mouth moves WAY too fast. But in general, the graphics was nice.

The style was also pretty good, the directing of the game increased my level of enjoyment in a very high level. The humorous atmosphere which you have built in the movie makes the game way funnier. I like the way that scene where she looks in the mirror, and the scene where she prays to god. However, in a lot scenes, the sound doesn't really match the style of the game, and it pretty much ruins the atmosphere.

The sound was nice, not too great, but it was nice to hear during the game. However, as I have mentioned before, the sound doesn't match perfectly in all of the scenes in the game. The sound matched most of the movie and the movie's atmosphere in general though, which was good. This sound which sounds violent and hard matched the violent game in most of the scenes.

The violence in this movie was aweosme, there was a lot of violence in it, and although a lot of time it was gross, I have enjoyed it a lot. This game has a lot of blood in it, and no-one can resist a huge ammount of blood in a movie\game. However, as I mentioned before, the blood is not very well drawn in most of the scenes. If it could look more real, the violence level of the game would increase, so as the enjoyment from the movie.

The game itself was pretty nice, in spite of the fact that it was very simple, it was good. There are many choices for you to choose, which makes it very fun. So as after you die in each time you can chose if to start over or just to go back to the suicide choise. Maybe try to emphasise the "go back to suicide chose" rather than the other buttons. Also, the go back to menu button doesn't work. What about making a "skip to suicide choice" button during the movie if I want to skip it? Or making a stop all sounds button if I want to listen to something while playing this game?

The script of the movie was very funny in my opinion. It was pretty silly and thus humorous. The fact that she wakes up, finds out that she has herpes and then kills herself is very simple, but I like it. As I have mentioned before, the style of the movie bfore the game was also very good, so it has made the plain script even better. I also like the suicide choices, they are very creative and mostly funny.

To sum it up, you need to improve a lot of things, mostly the blood, the sound, and adding a few buttons. However, in general, this is a very fun game and I have really enjoyed it. Good job.
>Lidov<

Score: 6

"Fine movie"

submission: Clash Of Rivals

date: April 28, 2006

This movie was pretty good as a sprite movie, and although I am not such a bit lover of sprites, I have enjoyed that a little, which is one point for you. I think that the characters you have chosen are not a very good choice, for the two couples have nothing to do with each other. Besides that, the sprite itself wasn't in a very high quality, it wasn't bad, but could have found better. The sound you have chosen was nice, however it is pretty annoying after a while. You could also have found something which matches this fight better than that. Also, there was barely any plot in this movie, just a fight, nothing more, some may see it as an advantage, I see it as the complete opposite. Also, why is the text box that colorful, it really doesn't match the movie. In my opinion, this movie wasn't violent enough as well, there were a lot of sprite hits, but there was no blood or anything, you can be creative and add some. Anyway, this is a nice movie, not too great, but not bad either, try to get better next time.
>Lidov<